Thursday, October 7, 2010

My Dream Last Night


Wrapped in sheets of desire
Our bodies not burdened
Minds melding
Exalted surroundings
Feelings rushing the gate, if ever



Fantasy lace paper cuts
Swirled in silken fabric
Air soft
Soothing heartbeats
Blending rhythms
Conjoined consciousness



Getting on with one's loving.

25 comments:

Jingle said...

super profound piece.
love the flow.

Jingle said...

your images are always stunning.
Thanks for brightening my day.
love your thoughtfulness....
Happy Rally....

if possible, have your entry link included when you do the commenting, best wishes in getting feedback from fellow poets,

Marlee-I Mystic said...

Profound visuals, very enjoyable read.
Happy Rally!

http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2010/10/06/can-you-stand-jingles-thursday-poetry-rally-week-30/

Lu Ann said...

Aww! very profound! I love the pictures. You´re such an artist!

I love it.

woih said...

ohh...this is liberating.

WOnderful wonderful wonderful writing here. Thank you

bodhirose said...

Beautifully sensuous writing--so expressive!

Olivia said...

What a beautiful one.. I loved the simplicity in expressing a soulful desire.. Your pics are imprinted in my mind forever..

Kristen: This is as refreshing as it could be..

Lovies xox

Lydia said...

Sensuously sensitive!

JamieDedes said...

The photos and the short-to-the-point stanzas work well together. (Don't you enjoy look for photos to go with the poems? I do)

Clear description appreciated. Mental pictures come instantly alive ...and lively. Nice work. Poem on ...

penelopephoebe said...

A lovely piece of work and the pictures are stunning.

ssina said...

wow this is such beautiful rhyme and flow :)
enjoyed myself reading!

vivinfrance said...

sensual - words and pictures, both.

Harshika said...

hmmmmmmmmmmm ;)

chweet poem :D

nice dream re :) enjoyed reading it. pictures are prettyyy!!! =)

senderupwords said...

This is a beautiful piece Kristin. I too agree that it is profound. Love and Light, Sender

Lovely Annie said...

Such a sense of release- of letting go into the moment! Stunning poem!

tasithoughts said...

I need cigarette and I don't smoke! What passion and beauty in this poem. You are a true artist.

fiveloaf said...

my kind of poetry..

Uncle Tree said...

If you were to ask me...I'd say,
only a woman could write
a piece such as this.

Soft, smooth, silky and lacy.
You're my kind of gal, Kristen!
Great word combinations help me see,
and your pictures fit in nicely. :) UT

dasuntoucha said...

Now that's a dream...thanks for letting us in on it ;-)

abthomas said...

Beautifully written and visually delicious! Loved it!

lukepraterswordsalad said...

nice. Enjoyed the pictures you pt between stanzas also

Warmest Salad

Luke @ WordSalad

Jingle said...

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/09/mountains-are-high/

take the awards after you are done,

for Poets Rally, 3 poems can be submitted....

also, vote your favorite poets after you finish your initial 18 commenting....

Thanks a lot!
have fun!

Bing (PinkLady) said...

i agree with all the rest... profound, sensuous, lovely play with words. what a beautiful poem!

Jingle said...

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/27/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-award-nomination-announcement/

please vote for fellow posts,
you are nominated, you win one vote, if you vote for other poets, you win another vote.

upon join the voting, you win at least a runner up award .
Thanks for the attention.

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