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Kristen, I like the haiku, but find it far too brief. I want more. This is a beginning, a very good one, as well. But, it feels like a tease, a wink from just beyond the curtain. Don't get me wrong, I like what you did, focusing in on the colors and finding the depths in the waves. I just want more...:)Elizabeth
I like the green sea colors of your haiku.
I like that you focused on the element of color - the sea green is so pretty!
Glowing haiku, Kristen!
Neat haiku. Lovely
lovely piece, short but strongly focussed...well done.
I love the haiku. So short yet so sensual.
Ooooh, very nice!
brilliant pic and an awesome haiku :D
Love the haiku, I think there should be more to it! It shows some potential to go a bit longer than this. Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/10/whisper-of-john-doe.html
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