occasional posts, a little reading, writing and art to get me (kristen) through the day...
very clever Haiku!
This has to be the first use of 'Olfactory' in haiku.Great word usage, seriously.
love a cute Haiku very clever writing!
good one :)
Small but perfectly formed.
Thanks for all your nice comments. It was my very first attempt at Haiku and I was worried that I wasn't doing it right.
Perfect haiku ........
this was well done and playfulRene
I agree with cosmoscami - olfactory rarely appears in haiku! Nice job!
Very neat indeed :-)
A beautiful haiku - I love the word olfactory! Thanks for visiting my blog and your kind comment.
oh so nice
great haiku, very clever! :) River
Very good ... olfactory! I'm impressed :o)
Short & sweet. I luv the title.
Too clever by far. Good for you! :-)
I want to open my own, oh, do I want to open my ownJealousy lingersShe opens her gold bottleI want my palma....:-)
Excellent first haiku, Kristen. :-)
I wasn't expecting a Haiku - very clever, I love it!
nice haiku...i imagine it would open you right up...smiles. nice magpie!
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