Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Getting New Stinky

Opening my own
Olfactory a scent my
Acqua Di Parma

21 comments:

kathew said...

very clever Haiku!

cosmoscami said...

This has to be the first use of 'Olfactory' in haiku.
Great word usage, seriously.

Bloggin'withAmanda said...

love a cute Haiku very clever writing!

ninotaziz said...

Enchanting!

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

good one :)

Brigid said...

Small but perfectly formed.

Kristen Haskell said...

Thanks for all your nice comments. It was my very first attempt at Haiku and I was worried that I wasn't doing it right.

Helen said...

Perfect haiku ........

Rene/ Not The Rockefellers said...

this was well done and playful

Rene

Tumblewords: said...

I agree with cosmoscami - olfactory rarely appears in haiku! Nice job!

jabblog said...

Very neat indeed :-)

Marilyn said...

A beautiful haiku - I love the word olfactory! Thanks for visiting my blog and your kind comment.

Suz said...

oh so nice

adventuresinpoesy said...

great haiku, very clever! :) River

Deborah said...

Very good ... olfactory! I'm impressed :o)

kathi harris said...

Short & sweet. I luv the title.

JamieDedes said...

Too clever by far. Good for you! :-)

Julie Jordan Scott said...

I want to open my own, oh, do I want to open my own

Jealousy lingers
She opens her gold bottle
I want my palma....

:-)

Paul Andrew Russell said...

Excellent first haiku, Kristen. :-)

Kaelin said...

I wasn't expecting a Haiku - very clever, I love it!

Brian Miller said...

nice haiku...i imagine it would open you right up...smiles. nice magpie!